You have made a good start here and you have articulately used terms correctly and in context.
To improve: - more examples are needed, this could involve linking to other existing texts - more pictures needed as evidence and to back-up points especially when discussing AIDA - reference list needed - more detail needed on audience - terminology needs to be used e.g., audience key terms and words such as form and style rather than always saying conventions.
Connor,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a good start here and you have articulately used terms correctly and in context.
To improve:
- more examples are needed, this could involve linking to other existing texts
- more pictures needed as evidence and to back-up points especially when discussing AIDA
- reference list needed
- more detail needed on audience
- terminology needs to be used e.g., audience key terms and words such as form and style rather than always saying conventions.
EllieB